Talk: Whistling Wizard

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Word Choice?

"The upper rooms were long and narrow and used a curtain to separate the bed and jakes from the closet and sitting area."

What is a "jake"? I don't think it is a real-world term, so perhaps it needs an article or a link to some list of Realms' jargon.

~ Lhynard (talk) 21:26, May 16, 2017 (UTC)

It is a real-world term and is not plural. See jakes. —Moviesign (talk) 22:04, May 16, 2017 (UTC)

Ah, cool. Thanks for the lesson. ~ Lhynard (talk) 22:45, May 16, 2017 (UTC)

And thank you for the proofread and GA. I swear you put commas in where my English teacher told me to leave them out. She said we all had comma-itis and over-used the punctuation. I careth not, as long as the meaning doesn't change. —Moviesign (talk) 00:46, May 17, 2017 (UTC)

Considering that, apart from commas, I think I only changed one or two other words, I think that your teacher should be proud of your grammar skills! ~ Lhynard (talk) 03:33, May 17, 2017 (UTC)