I rephrase the article but there are still some samall references that I considered essencial. LMEF2009 (talk) 18:13, November 16, 2015 (UTC)
- Thanks, but I believe you can rewrite it further. Changing it to past-tense is not sufficient (but is required). To help you along, try to separate and arrange the information in the various sections given at {{Person}}, then rearrange the sentences, then come up with new phrases and descriptions. A dictionary or thesaurus will help you come up with different words. — BadCatMan (talk) 10:06, November 17, 2015 (UTC)
- I reedit the article, I don't know if it was enough. LMEF2009 (talk) 03:01, November 21, 2015 (UTC)
- Thank you, I have gone further, rewriting the remaining text that cleaved too closely to the source, and generally overhauled the article. Have a look, especially at the revision history. I deleted the page as per our policy on copied articles, and recreated it with only the most recent versions. — BadCatMan (talk) 07:16, November 21, 2015 (UTC)
- Thank you so much for your help. LMEF2009 (talk) 09:46, November 21, 2015 (UTC)